I guess what I miss most from so much of the post-L=A=N=G=U=A=G=E writing is pure story-telling. I like a compelling story, having grown up around my paternal grandmother, Ora Kinder Glass, and my maternal grandfather, David Gow. Both were wonderful story tellers, Ora from Flatwoods, Virginia, with her Southern Gothic, and Dave with resources as far ranging as “I Love A Mystery” to family stories about his youth spent in a house with a tragic history in Rosedale, Maryland. I remember sitting for half a Sunday listening to my grandfather’s stories. And though I haven’t seen Ora, or “Muzzy” as she wanted us to call her, for about 20 years now, I’d love to sit down with her with a digital recorder and get some of what she says down in her own language. (She’s in her middle 90’s now, so I’d better hurry, I guess.) In fact, when I write some of my work, I do it in her voice. I can actually hear her speech patterns as I write. Writers talk about an “ideal audience” for their work, but the stories (and voices) of Dave and Ora are part of my creating, not part of my audience.
To continue with narrative poems, I’d like to include a small part of Leo Connellan’s “Crossing America.” This incredible, 21 page narrative concerns a man and a woman hitching across America in the early 1960s.
IV.
Cold, light off the road. Wreck of
a stranded car in the yard. Climbed in
thinking within, we could wrap ourselves
against cold cutting our livers
with its fingernails.
I went to the lit house fearing shotgun flash,
but there was no heat in the house either.
In a shack off the road a woman let me in
out of the brutal cold. She hovered with
eight children everywhichway on their one bed.
She let me in from freezing but she got up
and sat in a rocking chair and kept me
talking all night.
On the one hand she couldn’t bring herself
to let me freeze outdoors and at the same time
didn’t dare to trust me with closed eyes.
I knew she could kill me. I am alive
because I have recognized
death very close.
Where was the father of eight children
on this cold night.
I can see him, scrawny neck hunched over
steering wheel of a huge trailer truck,
maybe climbing Deer Lodge, Montanna mountain
with his false teeth on the seat beside him,
tired and thin and maybe not for long on the road.
I know him. He has given us a ride.
I told her my lady was cold in the wreck
but in that smug way one presumes that another
deserves what they get for being damn fool
to go traipsing with some idiot man
through the back washes of a continent,
she simply would not let her in out of the cold.
I told her our trip. She didn’t believe
me. No one just comes to your house
who really has done all these things!
Both of us were relieved when morning broke.
She carried my death with her
right to the door if I wanted it.
“Lobster Claw” is yet another of Connellan’s narrative poems that I hope to share with you, in part, in future.
Robinson Jeffers is another narrative poet I admire.