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 Patrizia Hayashi is a freelance writer and author. On a recent trip to California, she had the opportunity to speak with Kikuko Otake, author of Masako’s Story. They spoke of her book and her plans for the future.
PH: Describe the journey that led you to this place.
KO: Originally, I wanted to write an autobiography in haiku and tanka. Without talking about the atomic bomb, though, it would not be an autobiography. I thought I couldn’t describe it in haiku or tanka. They were too short. It was impossible. Overwhelming.
I didn’t remember much I remember seeing a perfect skeleton and a burned person I thought was an Egyptian mummy. He turned out to be a naked soldier with grayish white burns all over his body.
In 1991, I knew if my mother were gone, I wouldn’t know what happened. I needed to know for me what happened. Me and my family.
I spoke with my mother some and after, tucked my notes away. I myself had rejected it. So-so knowledge was fine. I didn’t want to know more.
Finally, when I wanted to write about it, my mother’s mind was gone. I thought about if I write what my mother told me. Prose seemed more interesting. Part I is a poem but not. Every line is where she took a breath. I don’t enjoy reading a book packed with words and letters, which are hard on the eyes.
I self-published in Japan and gave it away. Friends said it should be in English. Most such stories only rely on Japanese. People of the world don’t know.
I translated the entire book, chapters one through four. My son corrected it. I ended up eliminating chapter three. I don’t want to be a political person and don’t want to be an advocate. I wanted to show facts and describe what happened. I wanted to have each reader think about what they do.
PH: In your Letter to the Reader, you discuss the difficulty of translating your work from Japanese to English. Do you feel you captured the nuances you were looking for in these poems?
KO: The Japanese edition is very effective because it’s in Hiroshima dialect. In English, we can’t do it.
I gave a speech before Middlebury College students and spoke of not being able to get the feeling of my mother’s speaking. What about using a Southern accent? But why? The dialect or accent would take away from the impact
The English is a version. An adaptation. Not a translation. It doesn’t sound like the spoken language. The purpose and story, though, are the same.
PH: What kind of reaction have you received so far?
KO: Not much from American people. I gave the book to college and alumni friends. I’m expecting a review to come out with Rafu Shimpo, the Japanese-American newspaper, here in the US. Donald Ritchie posted a review in The Japan Times on August 5th, 2007.
PH: Which poem best expresses the message you wish to send?
KO: In the Japanese version, the worst poem is the one I described on the day of the bomb. I couldn’t describe it at all and convey the horror. Impossible.
PH: Which poem touches you the most personally?
KO: The last one in part I. We never never cry. Singing it, we started to cry. Beautiful.
The Hibaku-sha group encouraged us to publish and leave a record. Reading out only the one chapter, I think human beings don’t die very easily.
PH: Have you found a sense of closure by publishing this work or has it furthered your desire to do more with respect to the bombing?
KO: I wasn’t interested in what happened to others. I wanted to know what happened to me. I wasn’t interested in publishing. I laid out the facts and it’s up to you what you do with them.
Hiroshima city plans a fifty-state exhibition and I will visit some of them and talk about the book only. I’m not political. I don’t want to make more of it. I want to educate people on what happens.
PH: What are your writing plans after this?
KO: Writing my autobiography in haiku and tanka for my own pleasure. |
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